When a test is announced,
be sure to find out what kind of exam it will be: essay, short answer,
multiple choice, etc. Determine what topics will be covered and aht portios
of the reading material and lectures deal with the topics. If you have
not done all of the necessary reading, do so immediately and record the
important facts and interpretations. If you have missed any lectures, obtain
a copy of the notes from someone who [takes good and reliable notes]. Now
gather together all of the materials to be covered in the exam. Reread
the parts of the texts that you underline (or otherwise noted) as being
important. Reread all the relevant lecture notes, paying special
attention to any points emphasized by the instructor. Sometimes it helps
to do your rereading aloud.
If the test is to be
an essay exam, compose sample questions based upon the important topics
and themes contained in the readings and lectures. (Many textbooks contain
sample exam questions or topics for discussion at the end of each chapter.)
If you do not know how to answer any portion of the sample question, go
over your study materials again and look for the information needed. If
you are preparing for an objective exam ñ that is, one requiring short
answers ñ you must pay special attention to the important facts (persons,
places, events, changes) in your study materials. You must be precise in
order to get credit for your answer. Make a list of the outstanding people,
events, and historical developments and be sure that you can adequately
identify them and explain their importance. (Again, your text may help
you by providing sample short-answer questions.)
Take the time
you need to prepare adequately. If tests make you nervous, the best medicine
is to go into the exam confident that you know the material. Keep on studying
until you have mastered your sample questions and until the material covered
makes sense to you.
Taking Essay Exams
Even if you have prepared properly for an essay exam, your problems are not over. You must stay calm enough to remember what you studied, you must understand the questions, you must answer them directly and fully, and you must not run out of time. None of this is easy, but here are a few pointers to follow until you gain the experience to overcome these problems.
Question: Discuss the origins of the Chinese Civil War of 1945-49. How did the differing political programs of the two contenders affect the outcome of that conflict?
Good Answer:
The origins of
the 1945-1949 Civil War can be traced back to the rise of Chinese nationalism
in the late nineteenth century. Out of the confusion of the Warlord period
that followed the overthrow of the Manchu dynasty in 1911, two powerful
nationalist movements arose ñ one reformist and the other revolutionary.
The reformist movement was the Kuomintang (KMT), founded by Sun Yat-sen.
It was based on a mixture of republican, Christian, and moderate socialist
ideals and inspired by opposition to foreign domination. The revolutionary
movement was that of the Chinese Communist Party (CCP), founded in 1921,
whose goal was a communist society but whose immediate program was to organize
the working class to protect its interests and to work for the removal
of foreign "imperialist" control.
Although these two movements
shared certain immediate goals (suppression of the Warlords and resistance
to foreign influence), they eventually fell out over such questions as
land reform, relations with the Soviet Union, the role of the working class,
and the internal structure of the KMT. (The CCP operated within the framework
of the more powerful KMT during the 1920ís.)
By the 1930ís, when
Chiang Kai-shek succeeded Sun, the CCP was forced out of the KMT. By that
time the CCP had turned to a program of peasant revolution inspired by
Mao Tse-tung. A four-year military struggle (1930-1934) between the two
movements for control of the peasantry of Kiangsi Province ended in the
defeat but not the destruction of the CCP.
The Japanese invasion
of Manchuria (1931) and Central China (1936-38) helped salvage the fortunes
of the CCP. By carrying out an active guerrilla resistance against the
Japanese, in contrast to the more passive role of the KMT (which was saving
its army for a future battle with the Communists), the CCP gained the leading
position in the nationalist cause.
In the post-World War
II period, the CCPís land reform program won strong peasant support, whereas
the landlord-backed KMT was faced with runaway corruption and inflation,
which eroded its middle-class following. The military struggle between
1945 and 1949 led to the defeat of the demoralized KMT army and the coming
to power of the CCP.
Poor Answer
The Kuomintang had a
stronger army than the Communists, but the Communists won the civil war
and took over the country. Their political program, Communism, was liked
by the peasants because they didnít own any land and paid high taxes.
China was based on the
Confucian system, which was very rigid and led to the Manchu dynasty being
overthrown. The Chinese didnít like being dominated by foreigners, and
Sun Yat-sen founded the Kuomintang to unite China. He believed in the Three
Peoples Principles. At first he cooperated with the Chinese Communists,
but later Chiang Kai-shek tried to destroy Communism because he was against
it. Communism was not in favor of the wealthy people.
The Communists wanted a revolution
of the peasants and gave them land. They also killed the landlords. Chiang
Kai-shek worried more about the Communists than about the Japanese invasion.
The Japanese looked to conquer China and make it part of their empire.
Chiang Kai-shek wanted to fight the Communists first.
After World War II the Chinese
Communists attacked Manchuria and took over a lot of weapons The fought
the KMT army. The KMT army lost the battles, and Chiang Kai-shek was chased
to Taiwan, where he made a new government. The Communists set up their
own country, and their capital was Peking. That way the Communists won
the Chinese Civil War.
Letís see the differences between the poor and the well-written essays in regard to each of the four requirements for a well-written answer.
1. Adequate knowledge of the subject. The
poor answer fails to indicate adequate knowledge in several ways. It is
too brief, omitting many important facts. It describes the political programs
of the two contending parties in the most vague terms. It refers to the
CCP only as the Chinese Communists, leaving the impression that they were
a loose grouping of like-minded individuals rather than a strong, well-disciplined
political organization. It does not even mention the name of the most famous
leader of the CCP ñ Mao Tse-tung. Chiang Kai-shek, the leader of the KMT,
is mentioned, but there is no mention of his political program or beliefs,
other than that he was opposed to communism. Another serious defect is
the lack of chronology. The answer jumps back and forth between earlier
and later periods, and no dates are given for major events.
The well-written answer illustrates
a good knowledge of the subject matter. The origins, philosophies, leaders,
and relationship of the two contending parties are clearly described. This
answer brings in related issues such as nationalism, Warlords, guerrilla
warfare against Japan, corruption, and inflation, thus indicating a broader
knowledge of the historical context in which the Chinese Civil War developed.
The chronology is very clear, with events proceeding in proper time sequence
and with all major events identified by date.
2. Clear thinking about the points to be covered.
The poor answer is not organized. Note that the paragraphs do not make
separate points and that each succeeding paragraph does not further develop
the theme of the essay Paragraph one is a conclusion rather than an introduction.
The second paragraph goes back to the founding of the KMT, but instead
of discussing the origins of the hostility between it and the CCP, it merely
states that hostility came into existence. The third paragraph begins by
introducing the CCP (though not by name). However, it does not expand on
the CCPís programs and points of conflict with the KMT, but instead abruptly
changes the focus of events and the time frame by introducing the Japanese
invasion of China, which the last sentence of the paragraph only vaguely
relates to the question. The last paragraph, instead of drawing conclusions
about the causes of the Communist victory in the Civil War, merely states
that it occurred.
The well-written answer, on
the other hand, uses each paragraph to make a separate important point,
and each succeeding paragraph further develops the theme of the essay.
Paragraph one sets out the political programs of the two groups and the
historical context in which the movements originated. The second paragraph
explains the beginning of the conflict in the 1920ís. Paragraph three discusses
that conflict in relation to the Chinese peasantry during the early 1930s.
The fourth paragraph discusses the development of the conflict in relation
to the Japanese invasion of the late 1930s. The final paragraph summarizes
the effects of the conflicts and of postwar developments on the outcome
of the Civil War.
3. Well structured sentences. Many sentences in the poor answer are badly constructed either because they are awkward or because what they say adds noting to the answer. Some of the awkward phrases are "the Communists won the Civil War and took over the country"; "communism was liked by the peasants"í "China was based on the Confucian system"; "Communism was not in favor of the wealthy people"; [...] These phrases cause the sentences to be unclear, and they keep the student from getting his or her point across. The other major defect in sentence structure is repetitious or irrelevant sentences and phrases. These are "Chiang Kai-shek tried to destroy communism because he was against it"; "they fought the KMT army"; "the way the Communists won the Chinese Civil War." The sentences of the well-written answer, on the other hand, are clear, and each adds new material to the essay.
4. Complete understanding of the question.
The poor answer does not deal with the central issue of the question ñ
the political programs of the KMT and the CCP. It notes that the KMT was
founded on the Three Peoples Principles, but it does not explain what these
were. Of the CCP, it says that there was a belief in communism (which is
obvious) and peasant revolution (which is vague). These are the only references
to political programs in the entire answer! It is obvious that the writer
of this answer failed to understand that the central focus of the question
was on political philosophy.
The well-written answer is
directed to the central issue of political programs and begins on that
very point. The remainder of the answer makes clear the relationship of
political programs to the origins and course of the Chinese Civil War as
called for in the first sentence of the question.